Thursday, May 27, 2010

I Am The Sun

I am the shining SUN
I am a pretty YELLOW on the outside
But inside I'm the Fire Red but it's turning BLUE
And it's hard to deal with the blueness
But today was a Fire RED ME day !!!

Tuesday, May 25, 2010

When The Darkness Takes Over Everything

While reading the story "The Color of My Words" a saying comes up.
The line was " Darkness swelled over everything". In the story Ana Rosa is alone at home and she takes her brother's book after he said "No it's for work." But she was tempted to write a few pages and rip it out. But while at her 5Th page the lights went out and the darkness swelled over the house and it was a sign to not write.
But she was tempted.
When it said darkness took over everything it was like the badness was around because she was always so nice but the darkness stole her goodness. And she stole the paper. So it was like the bad was ready to take over her. And it did.
When you steal, something can be stolen from you: your niceness. Your goodness. And all you're left with is guilt.
It's so amazing how you can take a line from a book and say so much about things that really happen.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

My world

My world is like a Black whole
In that black whole lots of things happen
Dreams die
People Die
But new lives are born
Things are also found that are happy
like love, wishes and hope
When I look at my shadow as I walk I think will it die or succeed???
In this poem my thoughts are how will my life turn out because of my world

Tuesday, May 18, 2010

I can't Believe it

I can't believe that the test are over and this school year is almost over. I'm already going to be in 7Th grade and that's when it starts getting tough. I'm scared to leave my teachers and to leave my friends from my class and go to another class and also to see the new 6th graders coming in. I'm going to know most of them because when I went to present M.S.223 at my old school P.S.161 lots of my old friends who are gin to 6Th grade were very excited to know what school I go to and how good it is.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

My Day Today

Today I was in school and its was kind of interesting I got to talk to many people I never usually talk to. I also was upset because I got no awards in any class but I know the people who got it deserved it.