My world is like a Black whole
In that black whole lots of things happen
Dreams die
People Die
But new lives are born
Things are also found that are happy
like love, wishes and hope
When I look at my shadow as I walk I think will it die or succeed???
In this poem my thoughts are how will my life turn out because of my world
Miranda,
ReplyDeleteI took your poetry notebook with me today as I left school. Not just because I wanted to grade it, but because it is such great reading!! I wanted to read that instead of my novel. :) So I walked in my neighborhood until I got to this grassy spot. I put my stuff down, put in my earphones, and read your words. I read them through tears, smiles, and through sweet laughs. You speak with such honesty. And yet, you find beauty in the hardest circumstances. Hope is weaved throughout your poems, as a theme that peeks her head up out of the waters of hard times.
You are a writer!
I can't wait to see what you do next.
ps- your princess dream MUST be published. it symbolizes what we all want (i think).
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